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Forbidden love by ~FadingFromSight:iconFadingFromSight:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed


  Do you say her name and sometimes see my face?
  At night, when you think of your love for her...
  do i sometimes creep into place?

  I made a mistake.
  Did something i shouldn't.
  But i felt your heart.
  A saddened passion deep inside.
  Somewhere, you know...
  Somewhere we share a secret.

  Once upon a time,
  we were secret lovers.
  Sharing pieces of our true souls.
  No one could know, no one could understand.
  You were my true prince.
  And, hopefully, i was what you were looking for.

  Now our fairytale has ended.
  Reality is here.
  But, the stars and the moon, they know.
  They wait for us to find one another beneath their eyes.
  Someday we will.
  We'll make them smile.
  Maybe they'll even cry down upon our faces as we fall in love by their light.
©2004-2009 ~FadingFromSight
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Author's Comments

a forbidden love that goes beyond physical attraction. down to deeper knowledge of one another...... but you still can't have that person. no matter how in love with them you are. maybe someday................................. . at least no more "what if i had.........."
to be "secret lovers" you don't have to be fucking. sometimes that means you are sharing pieces of yourselves you've kept hidden from others. sometimes it means a few moments where deep in your heart and soul you know that's where you belong. when you look into their eyes you know you're seeing their entire self, and you know that they are seeing yours. these things can be more intimate than any kiss... or anything else. that person almost seems to be your "soulmate". they are your friend, your campanion first. and this deep intimacy builds. it builds so that just looking into one anothers eyes, wrapping your arms around each other and standing there is the most beautiful moment in the world. you fall in love with that person. but sometimes, you can't totally have them.

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~ScArLeTWaTeR666 Nov 12, 2004, 11:22:29 AM
I try not to let myself be seen..........the real me..............but I had an instant where time allowed for it...................I never realized how important this was until you gave me that note...........I slept all first hour and than it hit me soo hard in the face I think my mom felt it. my stomach was in knots my head spinning, I wanted to go and OD agian...........but I think its just the after addiction to the drugs I was taking.................

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It may seem at last days passing mean nothing
But the suns that set cause only pain
Violence in words like slashes wound deeply
Love is not when you feel only pain
Her touch poison flows through my veins
No more I denounce all your childish games
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~FadingFromSight Nov 12, 2004, 4:15:59 PM
please call me this weekend any time day or night so we can talk about this...please.
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~ScArLeTWaTeR666 Nov 12, 2004, 5:00:19 PM
Im sorry I cant..............I need to pull away..............Im sorry...........about everything.........craig.........everyth ing.............you need to rest.........take this weekend off the last thing you need is me at the moment.......................:blackrose:

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It may seem at last days passing mean nothing
But the suns that set cause only pain
Violence in words like slashes wound deeply
Love is not when you feel only pain
Her touch poison flows through my veins
No more I denounce all your childish games
:iconfadingfromsight:
~FadingFromSight Nov 13, 2004, 5:07:57 PM
no! no, no, no!!!!! :pissedoff: craig isn't your fault, nothing is your fault. you don't know how much i need to talk to you. this isn't seeming to register in your brain! how can you tell me what i do or don't need?? the last thing i need is to lose you too!!!!!!! that's not fucking fair. don't you dare take that away from me, too! please don't. i need you. do you not understand this? i need you as my friend right now. as someone to talk to. besides you might have a little more interest in somethign else i want to discuss with you. just, please!!! i need you. i'm going to be home tomorrow afternoon for a while, if at all possible.......... please!!! :sadangel:
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!SassAnne Nov 24, 2004, 3:44:33 PM
i really like this. lately i've been putting a lot of questions in my poems. i find it always makes it seem more personal. anyway, good job. keep up the good work. thanx for all your comments. :-)
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~FadingFromSight Nov 24, 2004, 4:00:31 PM
i love putting questions in my poetry. almost every poem has several. thank you for all of your comments. they all mean a lot to me :)

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i miss the past i knew,
i'm lost here without you.
turn back time,
do it all just right.
and maybe i wouldn't be so lonely here tonight.
:iconsassanne:
!SassAnne Nov 24, 2004, 4:03:24 PM
my pleasure...really like your poems.
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~singinghope Apr 6, 2007, 6:31:22 PM
this is beautiful...written with truth, feeling and depth...it's so unfair that when you do find someone you know is created for you, you can't have them...

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"Live deep and suck the marrow out of life."
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~Kinky-Slingy Apr 18, 2007, 8:03:10 PM
exactly... and that truth has many thorns on it ... distance is a factor of salt to the wounds... i know a man who fits your description... sadly we havent been together for 4-5 months, but i still love him.

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Love is like a heroine addiction. The first time you taste it, you succumb to the rapture of the feeling, and you strive to obtain it evermore..
Skitterflits!
Live, Laugh, Love
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